story – F.C. MALBY

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Short Story, Blood Red, by FC Malby

I’ve been recording readings of short stories and extracts of my work to SoundCloud. You don’t need an account to listen. I’ve recently added one of my longer and earlier short stories, which you can download as an eBook.

Set in Jaipur, India, this story reveals the hidden tensions in the mind of a young boy as he has to let go of the girl he loves for an unknown young bride, chosen by his parents. As the wedding day approaches, will he be able to follow his parents’ wishes in the face of his passion and quiet desperation?

Reader review:

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5.0 out of 5 stars Two Hearts Broken and Bleeding

“The title of this book is very rich in symbolism, and the story true depth. Two young hearts filled with a love that can never be, left facing a life of emptiness they have not chosen. It is easy to imagine their hearts left broken and bleeding. These two young people have no choice but to be obedient to their families and their traditional ways of life. The first line of the story reads: “Her, sari, the colour of blood, caught the breeze as she turned and walked away”. He knows that is the last memory he will ever have of the love of his life and is prepared to carry it forever. What a stunning start to a story! This story continues so full of emotion and is delicately written. It was very easy to empathize with the character right at the start. It takes a great talent to drag me in so quickly. I felt the pain as he did. This book can turn even the most hardened bachelor into a romantic! The story may be short, but the memory will last on.”

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What we can learn from Beauty and the Beast About Plot, Tension and Obstacles

Disney’s much hyped adaptation of Beauty and the Beast was released at the weekend. The film broke box office records with an estimated $170 million, making it the seventh largest opening weekend of all time. It’s a story that engages your emotions and keeps you hooked to the end. I was discussing the film with someone today who wanted to go and see it. She said it was her favourite fairytale and we were talking about what makes this particular story stand out. It occurred to me that part of the pull is the constant tension throughout the story, the conflict of interests, and the fact that the Beast is somehow flawed as a love match for Belle.

We all know the plot – an arrogant young prince and his servants fall under the spell of a enchantress, who turns him into the Beast until he learns to love and be loved in return. The headstrong village girl Belle enters the Beast’s castle after he imprisons her father Maurice. With the help of his servants, Belle begins to draw the cold-hearted Beast out of his isolation.

There is a tension between Gaston’s claims that he will marry Belle, and her desire for independence and dislike of his puffed up ego. Part of her appeal is the fact that she doesn’t want a relationship and is a strong and independent girl. She loves books, loves her father and, unlike the other girls in the village, refuses to fall for Gaston’s false charm. There is a tension between either Belle or her father being held prisoner in the tower.

There are obstacles in the way, in the form of wolves, Gaston, the villagers when they storm the castle, Belle’s need to rescue her father, and the Beast’s appearance and initial hostility. Every time you come up for air, another obstacle presents itself. Life can feel like this at times, but it is used as part of a plot to ramp up the tension and keep the viewer engaged and rooting for the main characters.

The fact that the Beast sees himself as unlovable and flawed because of the curse put on him, appeals to us because most of us feel flawed in some way, however big or small, aware of our less-than-perfect self. Yet, he wins her affection despite his appearance, which has kept him in his tower. It is in part because of this that we want their relationship to work.

I want to leave you with one of the highlights of the film…the library!

Beauty and the Beast

Story is Everything

Here are 25 thoughts on creating stories, in no particular order:

A lot of things have beginnings, middles and ends — but that doesn’t make them stories.
True stories have two parts: first something bad happens, second something bad is fixed (or a fix is at least attempted)
Plot-driven and character-driven stories don’t really exist; all stories are conflict/tension driven.
Suspense, tension, conflict — these things shouldn’t be limited to specific genres.
Asking what happens next is probably the wrong question.
Asking what is my character’s goal (or what does my character want) is probably a better question.
Better yet: what can go wrong now?
Ticking clocks give your story a deadline and a destination. Also, tension. Can’t ask for much more.
Give your characters some story-level goals, i.e., decide what it is they want, have them go after it, and the plot will almost fill itself in.
Storytelling is a timeless human instinct — trust and embrace your natural ability.
Tell your stories like you’re talking to just one person — an audience of one is the right number.
Start with the end, and you’ll stay on track.
Most stories start too early.
Many stories end too late.
Stakes are essential. Usually the higher the better.
In real life, we avoid conflict because it sucks. In your stories, you must embrace, chase it even.
Things can always get worse — we’ll probably enjoy reading that more anyway.
Not all stories have to have happy endings, neat little bows are for packages.
A good story doesn’t preach or moralize — it connects and resonates.
Good stories leave out the unimportant parts.
You have more stories to tell than you realize. Trust. Yourself.
Complex isn’t necessarily better. Some of the most powerful stories and pretty simple.
Trying for theme will kill a story — theme comes last.
Plot is as simple as putting one foot in front of the other.
And then? Keep asking until you figure it out.

This is reblogged from Justin Mclachlin’s blog.